Both
Michelle Obama and Ann Romney’s speeches hit home with almost everyone. They
described their love for their husbands, battles in life while growing up, and
how they not only enjoyed those moments but pushed through them to fulfill
living the American Dream. The speeches were both geared to let America know
that they need a president who will make the tough and necessary decisions to
get the country back on its feet. I believe that both Ann and Michelle had
effective speeches using the rhetoric, however, I leaned more towards
Michelle's speech. She played heavily
into pathos, letting her stories and life chip away at the hearts of her
audience. She used ethos ever so slightly to remind the public of who her husband
represents by mentioning the Lilly Ledbetter Fair Pay Act of 2009. As far as
logos, I did not see any usage. In a way I found this effective, as she chose
not to brag about statistics but prove the love her family has for each other,
and the American citizens; whether they are Democratic or Republican. Michelle actively kept the audience engaged
with the way she would interact as she spoke. It felt like Michelle let the
words naturally come to her making her relate to the audience not as a superior
but as an equal. Ann too delivered an amazing speech, however, when she spoke it
almost seemed to be forced, too rehearsed. She too emphasized the majority of
her speech on pathos. When she mentioned that "moms hold the country
together" she hit home with many women. Ann's use of logos was mentioned
when she said that Romney reduced unemployment by four percent. When it came to
ethos Ann fell short, as I did not see any usage in her speech. I did not have
an opinion about either of the speakers before their speeches, as I choose not
to get involved with politics. I enjoyed both of their speeches, but, in the
end I related more to Michelle Obama due to her public speaking skills, where I
believe that Ann Romney fell short.
Maureen's Blog
Friday, September 7, 2012
Monday, September 3, 2012
The Web Means the End of Forgetting
In the article “The Web Means the
End of Forgetting,” Jeffery Rosen unveils the horrors of what mindless posting
on the internet can do to tarnish one’s reputation for life. Rosen states that
500 million internet users are members of Facebook and 100 million members on
Twitter. He puts into perspective how often people post and how much
information is being shared on these platforms alone. With social networking
sites, people are constantly updating their statuses and sharing photos with
one another. It brings to mind that many people, who post, are doing so in the
heat of the moment. People’s news feeds are filled with pictures of their
friends drinking their lives away, partaking in illegal activities, and complaining
about their jobs and bosses. Rosen explains the damaging effects that this can
have on a person. He shares the story of Stacy Snyder, who posted a picture of
herself drinking captioned with "Drunken Pirate," and how she was
denied her degree to become a teacher. it is scary to think that jobs are now
checking into their employees social networking accounts, but they want to get
to know who they are hiring to see not only how they are in a professional
setting but in their own personal lives as well. This can be a dangerous
territory to cross into, because while you have control over what you post, you
cannot control what others say about you. The problem with this is once something is on
the web, it is always there. You do not know who has viewed or saved
conversation threads or photos, and if they resurface can be damaging to your
credibility as a responsible person. Rosen made many valuable points in the
article and he meant to make people think twice before they put anything on the
internet, it is just a matter if they choose to listen or not.
Tuesday, August 28, 2012
Rhetorical Precis: Kent Haruf
Rhetorical Précis
In his article “Writers on Writing”, Kent Haruf explains that, he, like many writers have certain habits that they follow through their writing process. Haruf develops his claim by describing the environment he surrounds himself in, what he writes with, writing his first draft “blindly”, and finally expanding on his original draft. His purpose is to show his take at the writing process in order to let the reader know that everyone has their own way of writing that will work best for them. Haruf seems to be writing with an underlying tone of humor geared towards those who have not yet found their own writing habits.
Thursday, August 23, 2012
Rhetorical Precise-Chapter 1
Rhetorical
Précise
In "Chapter
1" of Choices 2.0, Jon Hardin asserts that successful writers plan,
draft, review, and proofread. Hardin explains the importance of the writing
process with descriptions of prewriting, drafting, revising, proofing,
editing, the rhetoric, the rhetorical triangle, and the three appeals. His
purpose is to inform the reader that in order to write successfully, one must
utilize the writing process. Based on his tone and language, Hardin appears to
be writing to an audience with some knowledge of writing.
Rhetorical Precise-Introduction
Rhetorical
Précise
In
the chapter "Introduction," Jon Hardin asserts that with hard work,
motivation, and knowledge, a person who feels they have no natural ability to
write, often excel at it. Hardin explains that effective writing typically
requires hard work by stressing the importance of planning, revising, and
grammar. His purpose is to enlighten the reader that in order to become a successful
writer, one must make conscious choices about their writing. Based on his tone
and language, Hardin appears to be writing to an audience with some knowledge
of writing.
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